Mellifluous Phrase of the Day 11/17/09

More like Mellifluous Passage of the Day, but check out a master writing an action scene. A character has been shot, and his lifeless body is blocking the door to an apartment. Inside, shamus Philip Marlowe springs into action....
I jumped across the room and rolled him enough to get the door open and crowd through. A woman peered out of a door almost opposite. Her face was full of fright and she pointed along the hall with a clawlike hand.
I raced down the hall and heard thumping feet going down the tile steps and went down after the sound. At the lobby level the front door was closing itself quietly and running feet slapped the sidewalk outside. I made the door before it was shut, clawed it open again and charged out.
A tall hatless figure in a leather jerkin was running diagonally across the street between the parked cars. The figure turned and flame spurted from it. Two heavy hammers hit the stucco wall beside me. The figure ran on, dodged between two cars, vanished.
A man came up beside me and barked: "What happened?"
"Shooting going on," I said.
"Jesus!" He scuttled into the apartment house.
-- From The Big Sleep by Raymond Chandler
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